Peer Review

Today's peer review was actually very helpful to me. After reading what was written on my draft, I was able to add what was needed to my paper. I think it is much better now. I was missing a lot of detail in some areas and now, I feel, its much better. I actually liked this paper. I was really dreading it at first because I wasn't sure who to write about. Even after choosing my community member I was still doubtful about whether or not I could find enough information on her. Once I got my interview done though, I felt alot more confident about it and it was actually really easy to write. I really enjoyed the first paper but I got stuck alot in my writing with that paper. With this paper I seemed to be able to write most of it very smoothly.

I only revised one paper today but it was really good. He used alot of great detail and he made it easy to picture the person he profiled. I used to hate peer editing but its not so bad now.